Thou shall choose me as his one main lover
Thou shall not give into temptation of another
Thou shall be faithful and true to me
Thou shall treat me like the Queen Bee
Thou shall not just want to hit
Thou shall not be full of bulls*t
Thou shall spoil and pet me by calling me names like "baby"
Thou shall show me how a real man treats a lady
Thou shall be the one I'll want to spend my life with
Thou shall know how to "please" me if you get my drift
Thou shall want to give me the world
Thou shall let everyone know I'm his girl
Thou shall support me no matter what I do
Thou shall show me that love really is true
Thou shall not lie, cheat, or hurt me in anyway
Thou shall show me he's mines here to stay
Author notes
I wrote this poem out of fun. It isn't all that good {at least to me}. I might delete it but I did my best. Just tell me what you all think. Enjoy!!!!
Written March 12th, 2006
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Lol!! Thanks!!!
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The title was enough to make me want to read the thing cause we all know there is no such thing as the perfect man... lol... this write reminds me a lot of my Cosmic Commandments of Love. Thanks for the lovely comment on my You Bring Out the Beast in Me. That is really a picture of MOI behind that wild cat image.
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I'm willing to be a great woman in return! Thanks for the comment!
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Very thought provoking in a strange way
I have just one gammerical note - It is typically "Thou Shalt" not "Thou Shall" But that's just a note.
Otherwise...hmmm.. It speaks of a real desire for a man who is actually a man; and not these flimsy pansies that we have in such great abundance.
But I am complelled to ask: if you expect so much of your perfect man, how much are you willing to give in return? -
Shut Up! Lol!!
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YOU DAMN STRAITE BECAUSE SHE IS MINE SO
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Lol!! Thank You!!
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Sounds like the perfect woman, too!
Sounds like the perfect woman, too with the exception of even a fine gentleman of love and peace lik me needs a good slap on his backside every now and then! LOL!!!!! Hope you find the perfect man - I only know of one (slightly imperfect fellow with a red bottom) BUT sadly He has been spoken for!
Peace & Love!
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Thanks maybe I will keep it then.
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Don't delete it! This is a great write. But if you truly want to go away...even though I don't see why you'd do such a thing. Keep it up!
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Thank you J!
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I LOVE THIS POEM SWEETPEA!
AND I ALSO LOVE YOU!
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Hey to you too. Your right we haven't spoken lately. I've missed you too and Thanks!!!
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Thou shall not delete this! this is rather cute and fun to read. We should treat each other better! Good write and hello! I've missed you! The Shaker
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Lol!! Thank you!
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Thou shall know how to "please" me if you get my drift, this made me giggle! You should use this poem for your wedding vows! Great write. well done. debs x
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