When the world,
Has turned its back on you,
And you think no one is there,
To help,
Think again.
Because I am there,
Although you may not like me,
Or know me for that matter,
I'm the one,
That will be there,
For you,
Through the last hour.
At this point,
There is nothing,
Worth living for,
You really think,
About dying,
I tell you to stop,
And i end up crying.
You just lie there,
Hard as stone,
No beat of a heart,
No movement of a limb,
You lie so lifeless,
Drowned in your own blood.
I was there for you,
But that's what you failed,
To realize.
Please,
Don't make that same mistake,
Realize,
I'm there,
For you,
Just tell me,
And we can talk.
Author notes
Written March 12th, 2006
A contest entry
- How Badly Do YOU Want A Trophy? This Contest Will Only Have 3 Entries! Then I Will Close And Judge! by individuality.
300 points, ended March 12, 2006, 1 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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WOW!This is very nice poem!I loved it,it's very interesting!Awesome write!
Keep writing
Best Wishes
~LostMermaid~
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So often we fail to acknowledge the one(s) always there for us...whether it be our faith in God, a family member or friend...or all of the above...
You've certainly come across with a wonderful message in this lovely poem....reminding us to trust and confide in those who care.
Congratulations on the Bronze trophy
Dee
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this poem really got to me because it reminds me of a situation I was in..great write....
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Congratulations on your trophy. This poem is moving, sad. Made me want to hug someone...
Take care, good write
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and thanx for the applause
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i took ur advice and thanx
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Cuz I - i would have this have because i... and the title u change to you you stand a better chance at top prize with those edits thanks for reading the rules of no trophies only and good luck
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