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Him

Without you I am nothing
And with you I am or will become
Everything I was ever meant to be
When I am not with you I succumb
To the world and all I can see.

You love me no matter what I do
You gave me life and set me free
To achieve the goodness you deserve
You did not desert me but left your decree
Of right and wrongs and now you observe.

You never left me alone though
You maybe watching but your with me all the way
You never leave me by myself or without your love
Even when I am lost to the worlds sway
Your always there waiting to show me the way above.

Into your loving arms
To which I surrender myself
You carry me and my  burdens when they get to heavy
So we all know you do not leave us helpless
Or with to much to carry.

Author notes

So i was reading a friends LJ post and i was just hit with the urge to write a poem about "HIM" or God.
Dedicated To Becca the post writer for showing me what i had benn sort of neglecting. and to my Joshua for encouraging me to write
Written March 12th, 2006

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  • Mary E
    March 12, 2006
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    Into your loving arms
    To which I surrender myself
    You carry me and my burdens when they get to heavy
    So we all know you do not leave us helpless
    Or with to much to carry.

    This is my favorite part too beth, This is such a great poem about you love and need of God, This is truely an amazing poem, keep up the good work,

  • MylilSecret
    March 12, 2006
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    oh love thank you and thats my favorite part of the poem its the best part even though its at the end and its so true how much we all need him and how much he loves us.

  • MylilSecret
    March 12, 2006
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    Thanks

  • jkh
    March 12, 2006
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    Into your loving arms
    To which I surrender myself
    You carry me and my burdens when they get to heavy
    So we all know you do not leave us helpless
    Or with to much to carry.

    Thiss line tops it all off wonderfully. I loved this poem becaue it expresses your love and need for God in an amazing way. Keep writing!

  • Apathetic Killer
    March 12, 2006
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    good

    Very good

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