Behind this door,
lies you're hopes and dreams.
Too scared to open it,
but too close to let it go.
Behind this door,
lies the rest of your life.
The love you hope to have.
The pain you fear to receive.
Author notes
Written March 11th, 2006
A contest entry
- What's behind the door? by Lavender Butterfly.
300 points, ended March 12, 2006, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - New here...first contest by willowwisp.
400 points, ended December 18, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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short but profound!
thanks for entering...
best wishes in the contest!
Write on!
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Awe! I love it, it speakes in volumes. Like differnt people can take it in differnt ways, and read something completly different from it then another. You did a really great job on this and I love how you made it seem long, even though it's short.
-Lauren -
well, this seems to be what i am going through at the exact moment. for me it is hard to love. i recently won a contest with a love poem i wrote. i dont normally write them. that it y i seem to be so shocked. lol well, i wish that this poem had won. great if it did. i really liked this
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I liked this. It was well written and I enjoyed reading it. Good job.
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Lovely are our hopes and dreams, but, also frightening! Loved the read. well done and good luck in the contest. debs x
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good work. i like it
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This is a different write to what I would have expected from the perseption the picture gives, so thank you for surprising me with this lovely piece. Well done... x
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