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dying inside

happy exterior
dying on the inside
when nobody is looking
i fall to me knees
to cry
bloodshot eyes
black running down my face
looking into the mirror
with so much disgrace
where did i go wrong
what is wrong with me?
i must have done something
so make you do this
to me.
am i making up
for all ive done?
why do these tears
keep falling from my eyes
why do you keep
stomping on my heart
for how much you
have helped me grow
your just tearing me apart
Mentally im  LOOSING IT!!
Emotionally im drained!
Im I a horrible person
To deserve so much pain?

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Written March 11th, 2006

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  • Never Fall in Love
    March 12, 2006
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    wow, u actually put my feelings into words
    as 4gotton soul said, u are not a horrible person, and im sure that you never will be one


  • beautifuldisaster
    March 11, 2006
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    thanks. yeah i dont know if i know you lol. but thanks for the comment its really up lifting


  • Xxthe angry gothxX
    March 11, 2006
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    u r not the only 1 who is dying inside. i am

    u r Not a horrible person. some of the worst things happen to the best pple. it sux heh? at least u rn't drained where you cant even put it to words. i can so relate to this poem it isnt even funny. by any chance do you know me? lol i love it.