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A Fall I'll Chance

Take a deep breath
The world around you keeps changing
And you forgot to strap yourself in
There you are dangling
Holding on to life by a single thread
There's so much left to say
But words fail you anyway
Might as well give in
Give up
You're pitifully transparent
But at least you dont obstruct the view
When I think of clowns
All I see is you
Just give it up
Let it go
Let love in
Then you'll know
Life can be beautiful
Amoung the sacrifices
You just have to give yourself a chance
And let yourself go
Unicycle on a tightrope
When I still need my training wheels
I'm hanging in the balance
That's the way it feels
Would you catch me if I fell?

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Written February 5th, 2003

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  • Teddibly Abnormal
    August 20, 2006
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    ooo la!!! envy at your skill~~ envy envy.


  • June 27, 2005
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    That was so awesome. I really needed that right now.


  • Kelsey-Jo silver member
    November 2, 2004
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    Wow... that's so good! I don't even know what to say. This poem is beautiful and it flows so well... you make it look too easy! I'm jealous!

    Kelso

  • Butterfly214
    April 1, 2003
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    Great write...It's good to take time to look around once in a while... Thanks for sharing!

  • Canon
    February 22, 2003
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    whoa this is awesome...just live life and i love it....excellent write, wow i been missin out on some good poems

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