Strong in love,
Breathing together, cuddling
Holding you secure.
Let me love you too,
Let my fantasies come true.
I watch you move, beautiful in every way.
Come dance to the rhythm of my heart beat.
Move through me.
Darling, just let go.
Watch the world disappear around us.
Caught in the taste of your kiss.
A promise made, we will never be apart.
Moving, sighing, loving you.
I close my eyes and listen to you calling my name.
Every night I look for a brand new star so that I may name it after you.
I see the innermost core of your soul.
Not once or twice but more for good measure.
I came here tonight,
To let you know what I feel inside.
Our souls are united.
Hear me, my darling
As I call to you.
Holding you,
So soft, so warm.
When I think of you it sets my soul free.
Your eyes...
Deep wells of love.
Slow, deep breaths.
Touch me and everything will be okay.
I'll always love you.
No longer can I deny, or hide my desires for you.
If your heart is there for mine,
I'll love you forever and a day.
Let my fingers curl on a stray tress of your hair.
Sharing an intimate love.
Then I wake up and you arn't really here.
Author notes
This is a very intimate poem. It's not one of my best, but it means so much to me. I wrote it for my girlfriend. I'm really shy, so i've never told her that i feel this way. But, even though she already knows in her heart, i want her to really know, so maybe one day i'll let her read this.
Written March 11th, 2006
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now this is what i meant by substance.
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this poem is beautiful...Bravo! well written great piece!
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I liked it a lot. I liked how you made me see the scene in my head, and I felt the love, but then at the end you totally shattered it apart...cry! It's sad, but a really good write! Keep writing! - *SNAP*
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i really liked this poem, it was very sweet and im sure when you do let her read this she will be over the moon, and so happy that you really feel this way. This was such an amazing and touching poem, your love for her really shows though this and i hope you carry on these amazing writes. My fave lines i have to say were:
"I watch you move, beautiful in every way.
Come dance to the rhythm of my heart beat.
Move through me.
Darling, just let go." these lines actually seemed to be very sensual, yet they were the ones that really stood out to me. I mean all of your poem was amazing but they were my favourate.
Also you say its not one of your best, im afraid im going to have to object to that, this is an amazing poem and probably one of your best! this was souch a sweet, beautiful poem and thanks for posting.
Take care and keep writing,
Faithless Angel x -
I think that was tender and loving. Yes it was very intimate and you out alot of though, passion and soul into this poem! I really enjoyed this write and think that you have a great talent for showing and expressing how you feel.
I especially loved these lines
I watch you move, beautiful in every way.
Come dance to the rhythm of my heart beat.
Move through me.
Darling, just let go.
Watch the world disappear around us.
Caught in the taste of your kiss.
A promise made, we will never be apart.
well written and amazing. well done!!
take care
PD
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