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Those Empty Shadows, Overflowin' Without


As this warming breeze
strokes softly
bare flesh

Sleepy eyes give way to dream
and seem to float
within it all

I contemplate
the loss the love
This miracle of Truth above

My dreams, my friends
my love, my mom
Each taken

Wisps of smoke on air
Blown away from life

from my weakened, faulty grasp

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Written March 11th, 2006

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  • RockSteady
    April 4, 2006
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    exquizit

    I love you D


  • DancingQueenAngi
    March 16, 2006
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    Wow!! this was beautiful. you have amazing talent. your emotions were so strong and you got your message across in lyrical words without going on and on. this was amazing! good luck in my contest!
    angi