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for my aunt sonja

my aunt sonja you are so kind
(I don't know if this is a poem but oh well)
You take time to write me a birthday poem
that is so pretty and magical
it is simply divine
(bear with me in this part, I can't rhyme)

it truly shows that you have a heart of gold
that keeps giving and loving
it will never grow old
I don't know you personally but I know this for sure
I know that you are a goddess
and you are certainly not a bore
you are both funny and wise
you are such a good poet
and I loved your surprise
(that is the poem you wrote)
(ok enough with the rhyming)

well my point is that I love you so much
because you care and you are always there for me
and all of the other pixies



*I love you my dear aunt sonja!*

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hope you like it.  its not really a poem but oh well! hehe
Written March 11th, 2006

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  • March 11, 2006
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    A+++

    This is so sweet..writing about a family member..so sweet and lovely.
    Love Always Ella


  • Sonja
    March 11, 2006
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    Oh my, thank you my sweet Lisa. You do not need to write rhyming poetry, but this one is great, ... and everything...nice... you make me to blush. I will put link to this poem from my site.
    ~Sonja~