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This Feeling

This feeling
It's kind of like falling head first onto the curb
you fall so fast and don't want to get hurt
then you put out your hands and catch yourself
or someone else catches your first
that some one was you

I fell so fast and didn't know what to expect
but you reached out and stopped me
you showed me how to wait
to love some one for the right reasons
instead of the wrong

I love you because your perfect
even perfect has its flaws
I never found them
Their hidden so well

Loving you is what I do best
to you I must do it wrong
your disappointed so much
The way I see it

I must be blind

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Written March 10th, 2006

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  • Without-A-Reason
    March 13, 2006
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    i rele like this is sad and sweet great job