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The Love of my Life Eternally (Acrostic)

"My love belongs to you."
    ~Author Unknown


Thoughts wandering,
Haphazardly drifting, left
Empty and alone inside.

Longing for that special
One, the one that could be my forever love, a
Valiant knight, true to heart, my
Everything and anything.

Oh, how I wished...
Frantically praying for your existence.

Magically, as if by some great force,
You appeared before me, and it began.

Love...how deeply I have fallen
Into you, and all you stand  for.
For the love you
Emanate in return is the value of all life.

Each day, I live for you, I breathe for you...
Trusting you with my heart and soul.
Enthrall me with your mind, with your body, for my
Reality is locked inside you.
Never will I seek, nor will I
Accept more than what I can give.
Let me love you completely, my
Love belongs to you, for
You are the center of my world, and

The love of my life, eternally.


3/10/06

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Option 1, quote is My love belongs to you, from the site...
www.humorsphere.com/sms/love_qoutes.htm

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Written March 10th, 2006

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  • Little Brat
    March 28, 2006
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    Thanx for the entrie to my contest, I REALLY enjoyed your AMAYZING POEM!!! I'm going to have to look into reading some more of your stuff after I finish judging!!!

  • Melissa Powell
    March 10, 2006
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    Most wonderful!

  • Little Brat
    March 10, 2006
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    Great!

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    March 10, 2006
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    I just realized that the comment in the author's box was actually cut off due to literally quoting it. Perhaps you cant put the quotation marks in there, its been corrected.

  • Little Brat
    March 10, 2006
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    Yeah it pissed me off when I first realized it did that and I had written a REALLY heart felt comment about why I had wrote the poem! Someone should let AP know how ANOYING that is.

  • Little Brat
    March 10, 2006
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    SWEET!!!!!!!
    That's really cool!!!
    I did't even realize that!!!
    Most poems I have read like that don't flow AT ALL!
    You did an AMAYZING job with this poem and have inspired me to write some Acrostic poems myself in the future. Thanx TONS for entering my contest!

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    March 10, 2006
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    Alrighty, I never had that problem before with the author's comments showing up. When the heck did it change? Sometimes it really sucks when "they" think they are making upgrades...

    Autumn

  • Little Brat
    March 10, 2006
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    Hey I just realized something!
    Is that what "Acrostic" means???

  • Little Brat
    March 10, 2006
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    WOW I like this poem It's one of those that sound cool if read as a spoken poem!
    I think this is the first time I've read a spoken poem on AP!
    Great job!
    P.S. You might want to shorten your comment though so that it all shows up. I've made that mistake before myself and I really don't like that AP does that if the Author's comment is long. It's the Author's Comment after all it should be as long as they want it to be!
    right??
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