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Pure Love Young

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Final-exam Fire
(a feathery filigree of frost)

Love is a multifaceted filigree

~Pure love~

Eyes

shades of light amethyst and smoked glass

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An attempt at combining the innocent spirit of young love and pure (agless) love.
Written March 10th, 2006

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  • sweetiepie694501
    March 27, 2006
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    this was beautiful. i dont kno wmuch about haiku, or if this qualifies, but it was amazing. good job. i looked at your author page too, and i like the drawing you have on there. if i had money to afford to pay and become a silver member, id put some of my drawings on my author page too, but oh well i digress. good job though.


  • abigail06
    March 12, 2006
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    excellent

    short and sweet. you really are very talented. thank you for showing this to us. i hope you find what you're looking for -abbie


  • Timothy Cameron gold member
    March 11, 2006
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    I'm trying to write some poems that are not filled with dark pain. See if I can break free.


  • cherche -d -ame
    March 11, 2006
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    love the filigrree delicacy of this, and that word implies the fragility of love so well (first , last or forever love)so intricate and fragile...yet never to unravel completely
    xoxoxo
    reenie


  • luckynsincere
    March 10, 2006
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    Well.. a moron said that? Well I think it is just fine. You see more sex on cartoon network...lol. Now this... this piece is absoultely gorgeous! so profound. Again, only you have the power to capture me in your words this way
    Love and hugs.
    Meli


  • Trellis
    March 10, 2006
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    Pure excellence!

    My filigree Friend, this is exquisite! Its brevity gives it power! The alliteration gives it grace. I love the use of the word 'filigree' (very fresh), as well as the colors of amethyst and the smoked glass. Every word is Superb!!!! This is a beautiful gift!

  • Timothy Cameron gold member
    March 10, 2006
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    Some moron (I won't say who) marked the image in the background, complaining it was adult ony...duh! It's already in adult only and erotic. I commented on why it was called an erotic poem. Retards. What am I supposed to do...email everyone on the site and say, "Don't look! It has a dirty picture in it." Sigh. Anyway, I hope you were OK with my being motivated to use your line. I assume you won't make me retract it. I did ask, but didn't wait, either.


  • Redstormy gold member
    March 10, 2006
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    Love it !!

    Red

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