It's those sparkling blue eyes,
making my heart melt.
It's those freckles, caressing
your beautiful milky skin.
In your touch,
I feel undying affection.
When you kiss me;
I bask in Paradise.
You whispering in my ear
something special,
just for me.
Watching the snow fall,
Angels' secrets drop from Heaven.
When I go outside I hear them chant.
The beauty of the scene is like no other.
Except, in your arms,
I feel my heart glow.
Blood flowing freely,
and dancing through my veins.
No vision will ever come close.
Nothing so serene,
will ever be worth more
than being with you.
It's those sparkling blue eyes...
Author notes
Written for my wonderful boyfriend.
Written March 10th, 2006
A contest entry
- how do you love? by this is all i am.
350 points, ended May 16, 2006, 26 entries
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Awwww very cute write
Lovely flow of words.
My favourite stanza:
"Watching the snow fall,
Angels' secrets drop from Heaven.
When I go outside I hear them chant.
The beauty of the scene is like no other."
Thankyou for entering my contest,
Claire xx
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this is very sweet, how the simple things, like the peaceful blue eyes of the one you care about, can just make it that much more pleasant to be in the presence of that someone; make it so special. i love the way this is written, thanks so much for entering my contest
your friend
emily
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very nice.
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oops...
I meant to click reply...shoot...I hope he still gets the reply -
I revised it again...tell me what ya think, if you will thatd be great
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Thank you again so much! I see what you mean majorly, most of the edits you made, make me feel more than my newer edits have. Thanks again
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Awesome!
Excellent! I loved this! Another great poem! You have some real talent. I'm with the others on this poem, it was so sweet to read and I really loved that it was about and dedicated to your boyfriend. Beautiful! Another well worth the applause -
That was very good. It was so deep.
I really like it.
Good luck in my contest.
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Awwe, so sweet! I really like how you used very descriptive language! I think you did a great job!
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This was Sweet. Love is something so extradinary<spell< You made a great depiction of that, and the feeling of your love for him. Great write!
Much Love
Faith Trust and Pixie Dust -
Thank you so much for the applause and your kind words!!
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very good peom. it was fun to read, and i loved your descriptive words. and a little creative like:
Those Freckles that caress
your beautiful milky skin
the poem flowed good too.
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Beautiful, Excellent, Wonderfu!!!
This is just so beautiful, so BEAUTIFUL! I loved this. I like how you dedicate and wrote this poem about your boyfriend. That's just a beautiful thing. I loved the poem, it was so well written that I wanted to read it twice. This is a poem that is definately worth the applause.
Take Care,
x PatientGrace x
Jasmine
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AAAAHHHHH!!!!!
SIGH!!!!!!!
SSSSSSSWWWWWWWEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTT!!!
that about sums this one up. great job. viyanna r langager
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