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Contented Sighs

Sometimes
     somebody rearranges somebody else's life
     They traipse across relationships
     without being asked
     and snuggle in your heart
     if you want them there or not

sometimes

sometimes

Everybody
     oughta have a Somebody
     a key to fit perfectly
     in the lock to their heart
     a jelly to your peanut butter
     a cookie side to your cream side
     (insert your clever saying here)
everybody
     oughta have their own You because

sometimes
     you happen to be on a couch
     watching Garden State
     and yawning at key points
     with your two best friends
     wishing only the couch existed
     and there was nothing else
     to occupy your time and nobody
     else to occupy your time and
     nothing else except for
     Garden State and the couch
     and your two best friends

Sometimes

Author notes

Sometimes


You just have the urge to write something awful. It's pretty self explanatory. I was reminiscing on a extremely content time when I was, well, sitting on a couch with my two best friends, exhausted from a long night with no sleep and wishing I could be there instead of anywhere else in the whole wide world.


Who knew rural Indiana could be so peaceful? (if only for a moment...)
Written March 10th, 2006

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  • spinachisgreen
    December 9, 2006
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    sweet

    aw.


  • penman gold member
    March 31, 2006
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    Excellent

    This is a very creative piece. Sometimes sound wonderful to those who don't always know it. Great job.

  • dream catcher
    March 10, 2006
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    Of course rural Indiana is peaceful, there's only corn and beans to occupy the space
    Hmm... Interesting set up.
    "(insert your clever saying here)"
    Kind of reminds me of your poem where you said, that's so cliche, or something like that and someone posted a comment saying you shouldn't have that in there if it's so cliche.

    Hmm... Been on a draught lately haven't we? Not too many poems as of late. All well, guess you're back at it. Good times