You smile, you laugh,
but inside I cry.
You frown, and you doubt,
then I die.
I would be better than him,
and I wish you knew,
the the feelings inside me
are honest and true.
But then again,
how could you love me?
I'm a pauper...
In line for succession,
you are the noble.
In line for depression,
I am the slave.
Whenever you look at me,
It's like I'm on fire.
I love when you look at me,
and fill me with desire.
Those beautiful eyes,
are too much to bear.
I look your way,
but the emotion's not there.
Just that same sweet green,
to look down on your kingdom,
when you are the queen,
And I am your pauper...
Author notes
Vexx's hidden feelings for Rilynne.
Written March 10th, 2006
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Longing!
You describe longing with your words...
Hoping and dreaming of a smile or glance
and feeling like you hold your hat for alms...
You nailed the feeling with this poem. Jane
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<3
Thanks very much Laura! -
brill
omg!!!!
this poem is so sweet!
i like the first two stanzas and the last it is a very emtional peice and it shows Vexx's feelings for Rilynne like you said!
anyways
great write
Laura
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thx mandi. keep working on your french! lmao. Thx for the comment, much appreciated
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awwwwwwww thats sad =( i would hate to fall in love with a noble i would feel so stupid...=( just because i know they would want nothing to do with me...=/ but you put yourself in the place well ^_^ for it not being personal experience ^_~ wonderfully written
~Mandi -
This is beautiful, and haunting, and, and, and.. a lot of postive words that I can't think of right now. x x; Eheheh'... yeah.
I'm not sure if this is JUST about an RP you're in, or if perhaps there is a double meaning here.
Ah, well.. I'll find out if I'm meant to know. 
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I like this. I think it shows a bunch of emotions and feelings throughout the poem. Excellent work, I absolutley loved it.
Take Care,
x PatientGrace x
Jasmine
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