the gentle undulation of your curves
unfolding into pleasures yet untold
behold the very beauty of your soul
I find in every cell, I find in all
so grant me just a little of your time
to share with you my burdens, to unwind
the knots that every day life tends to weave
your blessings are the very air I breathe
So let the lantern rest within your hands
to lighten my warped path, fullfill demands
the shape that every day life presses me into
you give me strength, the force I yearn to come to
your fire burns through all evading apathy
your love like water cleanses me once more
you are the very spark that stirs within me
my solid rock, my shimmering blue shore.
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Written March 10th, 2006
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Not Finished , but i agree with Isi abosulutely amazing. You great, and your work has been some that ive always looked forward to reading since ive been a member here at all poetry. You express it just how it should be expressed with a deepness but use words that i sometimes don't even think are in my vocabulary. when you write your heart simply chooses the words perfectly. Ill be waiting to see what comes of this. Nice job as always friend.
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All hail...
Hey friend!
I wish I could write the way you do about a subject such as this. I usually get so emotional I can't keep my head on straight... The first two stanzas are absolutely amazing, the wording hits me and the rhyme and flow works really well! On the third stanza it reads a little harder, particulary the last two lines, but at the same time I just love the wording so much that I wouldn't have you change anything
Looking foreward to seeing what it'll evolve into, this one
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I like it.
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