Relationships are fragile
Love is what it takes
Both partners must be agile
At giving each other breaks
Tiki Cat
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Written March 10th, 2006
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excellent
Compassion and love make relationships work, "giving each other breaks" smoothes the way considerably. What a wise cat you are, Tiki! This is very short but well rhymed and useful.
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excellent
short and sweet, i love the rhyme
we must all give each other breaks, but we must also see things from others points of view
take care
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the problem is that there are some people you would love to hate, really hateful personalities that there is no loopholes through which any dim light of love could transcend. i hate to say it, but in this case no hatred advised only keeping distance apart
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Some simple things are most difficult to do. Loving EVERYBODY, for example. Some people are hard to love --Ellis
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I wish both sides remember that in bad times, I hope I myself remember that, as simple as it might seem, but compromise is a must in any relationships. but again both sides, not one that always gives and the other is only taker never giver! wish everybody could comprehend that
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I believe people think of that seriously. Some compromise is necessary for a relationship to thrive --Ellis
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beautiful
brilliant in its wisdom and simplicity, but do people think of that seriously? -
Hi Tiki
Great poem Keep writing, I liked this- short and true I'll have to get my Megan into poetry, she's into art (appreciation) at the moment
All the best
Pozo
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Very true Tiki. We have got to give more and take less. Is this meant to be applied to the international scope of things? This was in the anti-war peace section of writes. Well, it could be applied to nations.
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Yes, this is a super good poem and I have chosen it to post on my blog, Poetry Planet, tomorrow, April 1. Thank you, Ellis!
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Brilliant
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Well put! And so very true it is! Great write! Susan
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Tiki sees more than alot of humans do!
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Beautiful sentiments.
Beautiful words of wisdom Ellis, very true. -
at Tiki and Snow.... Snow is on to you, Tiki... Snow knows that look that says ..this cat swallowed the 
This is a nice poem, Tiki.... It really does say a lot in those few eloquent words. Give and take with feeling and compassion, that's a big part of love
Good job
Dee
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Burp
A bird is seen
Snow: Go and catch that bird
Tiki Cat saw this lovely bird and MEOW
Snow: Where's the bird?
Tiki Cat: Meow (I don't know)
Snoow: Where is the bird?
Tiki: What's the rush? Take it slow!
That bird is gone.
Where I don't know (burp)
Tiki: It flew away, maybe that way
(points up)
Snow: It's here to stay
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Very true. Tiki Cat are you talking about you and John relationship?
I found this poem very true and close to heart. Short and deep.
Wish you the best
snow 
Snow: Go and catch that bird
Tiki Cat saw this lovely and MEOW
Snow: Where's the bird?
Tiki Cat: Meow (I don't know)
Where is the bird?
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Well gee.. Tiki sure does write well! To be so short it sure says loads of truth in this! Tiki must know what love is eh? Well done... a most excellent piece! ~Melissa
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aww
very sweet. the message is one that comes at a right time for me. thanks. -
Oh I just love it. Having many physical difficulties at such a young age my husband has had to be really patient with me and give me lots of breaks! Wonderful poem.
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wow..my lovely Tiki has written a new piece? A nice piece my dear Tiki.
Shahrzad
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