Love lost and love won
All is fair
I hate you and I want you
Keep you to my self
I want to make you suffer
I want to see you smile
Past trials coming undone
One against the other
What have we gone though?
Only to go again
No progression here
Only this angst and emptiness
Quickly filling up with bitterness
That void cannot be healed
Sand in the open wound
Forever will it irritate
Those words that mean so little
Those words that mean the world
Meaningless voices chattering
When only feelings have sound
Try to hard or not enough
What is left of me?
Open, bleeding, and raw inside
Only death awaits me
But even death is just a prelude
To an eternity together
As hated or as loved
Red strings once forged
Hold…forevermore
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Not my best, but it's raw.
Written March 9th, 2006
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so many times do we find ourselves in this situation. loving someone and hating them all within the same breath. i am there at this moment in time. draven is home btw. hes in fort hood and has his cell. same number. maybe you can get through to him. i can't. but thanks for the comment on my poem. things will work out for you in the end. always eesha
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v.good
this is cool the first stanza is the best one in my eye because it is exactly how i have felt about a certain ex at one point, but now i just want her bk.... anyways great write and thanks for the comment on my work, keep on writtng and peace out -armoured heart- -
Wonderful
Wow a very deep and powerful message. Such a great write filled with so much emotion and raw feeling. Sweet sentiment and fiery depth all in one, i loved it, thanks for the chance to read such a great piece. Keep up the great poetry.
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