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Feel this way

Why do i care so much
about you?

The only thing you ever did,
was hurt me.

Run my heart through your
wheel of Lie's.

But i can't stop thinking
about the way you had made me
feel at one tiny moment.

That feeling of complete
.......freedom..........

I miss you so,
but i hate you too.

You hurt me so bad,
but it was so long ago.

But can you or anyone
tell me why i still
care so much about what
you think??

Author notes

WOW! this is sucky, it came outta no where just this urge i had to write this feeling down....i think i might know who it is about, but i am not completly sure......but...can anyone tell me why i feel this way??? sorry its so shitty
Written March 9th, 2006

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  • XxDeath KittenxX
    March 23, 2006
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    i know how you feel. its difficult to understand emtions like this. its extremly difficult for me to understand my friend that i dated and why i still feel for him when all he did and still des is and was hurt me. its weird how i feel i about. but i do agree and this is a lovely piece of work.


  • strawberrie2005
    March 20, 2006
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    this is really good and i wish i could tell u why u feel this way but i cant b/c i have the same feeling and have yet been able to explain it to myself... but if u figure it out i would really love to know well anyways wonderful job and i hope this helped you get your feelings out!


  • AmBrO
    March 9, 2006
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    Wow, that was a really good write..you let all your feelings out...and thats what you gotta do sometimes!! i dont know if i told you when i saw you at the park that Donny is back in prison!!! Yeah it sucks dude..he has been there for sixteen days... ive ben counting...it sucks bad though..i miss him like crazy...But this was a great write jess...i really liked it!! Keep on writing... sweetie..your a good one!! Love ya..
    AmberLeigh
    (Soon to be Mrs. Buckley) ..hehe..
    oh and madison says hi too.


  • befearless247
    March 9, 2006
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    i can really relate!!! i dont think its shitty at all!!!! i liked it. it was just raw emotion. even if you dont know who its about. i have A LOT of those kinds of poems, and people tell me they are sorry i was hurt so bad, then i have to tell them. no. i wasnt hurt, i can just write about this feeling! but i mean, the emotion works well for you! keep it up!!