When time passes you by not knowing where to look
next to all the feeling of being left behind
all the stuff some people go through
like me
What about me? No one really does know me for
I'm a broken poor defenseless heart running
from my problems for I cant take them
all on my own, I'm not strong enough
Enough is enough I cant take anymore
of all the hurt that has been done to me
I give I take but don't receive nothing
but the shame from my past still haunting
me for I cant never forget or forgive
what has happened.
All the nights I stay wake thinking about
lying to everyone about things Ive said
or to make them feel as bad as me but
I realized no one will feel like me
For I'm pouring out my heart for the
love of people to care and love me for
who I really am but who am I am the
O U T C A S T
Author notes
This is just how Im feeling its kinda hard to explain right now its too long of a story people would be sleeping...lol
Written March 9th, 2006
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excellent
hey that is really good. I enjoy reading that. I wish people did not treat me the way they do. I wish people would understand what I go throught also. Keep up the good work -
w0o0w this is really amzing!!!! great job expressing your feelings!!! i liked it a lot!!!
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I like the way you've been able to put into words what your are feeling. The writing feels fresh and authentic.
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fantastic
wow this is really good and sad i know how you feel. how come we never really talk, we just always say hi. we should have a real conversation sometime. you can tell me anything or nothing if you want but it is good to talk you feel better, i know it helps me. awsome poem. -
I can relate to this poem very well. Very powerful, emotional, and descriptive write once again and it flows together well and tells an outstanding story. Truly a wonderful piece. Great job! Keep up the amazing work!
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hey its me im in the nut hut but ya! i love you write me at home michelle mccullough 76 3rd ave atkins iowa 52206...
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It is sad what other people have to go through day by day and the places they liove at. in your case it is quite interesting the way you point out how your life is like. I been a loner all my life some one who is quiet yet talkative when spoken too. Life is rough and although you feel outcasted try not to feel so down on yourself and try to keep your head up smile through think aand thin. Lif eis short and yet although it may fele like a crappy worthless life you sahould keep your ehad up no amtter what. good work with this wirre although tis very berry sad
Sincerely, Paul
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*cries uncontrolably* im sorry you feel this way. I love you sissy!!!! great poem!!!!
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very good
wow i honestly know the feeling
to hurt and noone understand feeling so alone in a world that wont accept you for who you are. its hard but you gotta keep livin
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