Tears were steadily streaming down my face
All that was left were memories that I had to embrace
As I saw her, my best friend, in her long deep sleep
There was nothing better for me to do other than cry and weep
All of this is my fault that it had to happen that way
It should have been me getting shot and her on earth to stay
Why did they have to kill my girl
When that bullet was really meant for me to leave this world
She was an innocent victim in this situation
When the bullet was shot she jumped in front of me with no interpretation
I hate myself for getting her killed
I bet those that did it were very thrilled
I miss my friend, but now she's gone and never coming back
Some tell me to be happy but that's something that I lack
Till this day I'm still grieving over this
But I know one thing... she'll truly be missed
Author notes
Written March 9th, 2006
A contest entry
- Lost love by angels song.
400 points, ended March 20, 2006, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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SO SAD & EMOTIONAL!
But i know one thing - she'll truly be missed!
This is very said, indeed! Is it a true? IF it is - I'm sorry that you had to go through this sad, sadsad and tragic situation that took your friend away from you. When you get a few- take a look at THE GATHERING from yours truly that may be a comfort to you as it has been to several others on AP who have lost a friend or loved one. You expressed your emotions well.
Peace & Love!
Earl -
Whatever!!
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*COUGH* *LIER* *COUGH*
LOVE YOU!!!
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Great poem, Great flow!! I love how you passed on the emotion and pain to us readers with A flowing grace that lets us all embrace the meaning...
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This was very beautiful and so sweet. I am sorry for your loss there is nothing more painful then lossing a friend that you love with all your heart. I am sure she is in a better place now watching you and keeping you safe. Thanks so much for entering this piece in my contest it was truely heart felt. Keep up the great work. And good luck
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All I can do is feel sadness but thats too sad in a way taking away from the true emotion of your poem. Once you found that, there will be nothing left to fix. It was good
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This is very sad but the last line was kind of sweet. It is good to remember those that meant a lot to you. Great Write!
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