Sky fills grey with snow
merging into horizon
tongue-tip tastes winter
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Written March 9th, 2006
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This is sweet.
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It doesn't snow where I'm from. Tasting winter would be divine, I think.
-joan.
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Oh yes, a lovely one that I relish, totally.
Your haiku are wonderful, Mairi! 
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I'm not so sure about this one. It comes across as wholly sensory. If there is feeling to it, it is subtly buried. But I know what I was trying to say.
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That's right where a haiku should be
. Thanks for dropping by, Ellis.
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Excellent
Very real. Right up in my face! --Ellis -
Melodies, it should be daffodil time here in Scotland. Instead we are under a foot of snow!
Edited on Mar 12, 10:59 p.m. because '{can't spell daffodil - Wordsworth is turning in his grave!}'. -
Thanks zandr
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Like this a lot!
Don't put your tongue tip on a metal bar. That's the only danger here, in winter! Seriously, this really reads like winter. Let's light a fire and play Scrabble! -
interesting write ... with good flow od words
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