You try to keep
your head
where you lost it.
You call it metaphorical
decapitation, really -
literally losing your mind
along with your head.
Your head in your hand,
handle it well
lest you lose it
to someone/something/somewhere else.
Must you head there,
mind you,
mind your head.
Head where your mind
takes you -
And take your mind
where you're headed.
Head
Mind
Mind
Head
It's too easy to lose one
even if you haven't got one.
Author notes
An exercise in half-meanings in lines and wordplay.
Written March 9th, 2006
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metaphorical decapitation
this is also a good title
ang galing ng idea
but since i know you're good
and you said this is a wordplay
i just can't just wordplay something amazing as this
musta na
saw your lomo cam
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excellent word play on head and mind and a warning not to lose one. don't lose your head over something...that will help you keep your mind
i admire your work and that goes for this write too
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Interesting
Wow i got confused when i read that fast nice play with words -
good
good job -
well, the first time i read it, i was confused to say the least. nevertheless, it's a very interesting animate poem. it makes you wonder!
Well done, a very good piece
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Well done
Awesome piece , such a neat idea to ponder over , then realize its a solemn truth lol. Love poems like this that make you think! Thanks for the reading, keep up the good poetry. -
Interesting piece., one of those you have to read more than once to get the impact. I think that is good though. Lots of fun wordplay.
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GOOD POEM
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