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jeolous cow

Sorry for being a jealous cow
And not trusting you.
Love should have moved me to believe
That what you said was true.
If I love you, I respect
Your being and your word.
To love someone and live in fear
I see now is absurd.

But love it was that made me fear,
A narrow, winding love
That twists itself around itself
To chain what it can't move.

A love of desperate need, not joy,
Of codicils, not song.
A love that grasps instead of gives,
Most weak when it's most strong.

So please forgive my lack of trust;
I know much better now.
Love's parody will not again
Make me a jealous cow.

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Written September 3rd, 2006

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  • Magic Bullet
    March 9, 2006
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    It's ok, if you make me a steak pie for dinner and wear that french maids outfit all will be forgiven.