Pull my puppet strings, Pull me left and right.
Guide me like the sun an moon, Guide me with your light.
Dance with me for hours, Sit, dont say a word.
Stare into my ocean's eyes, Let our silence just be heard.
Saranade the world, like the cool calm breeze.
Like the snowflake to the angel, Like the fall time to the leaves.
The intoxicating smell, of a sighing mornings breath.
Then the chilling feel of coldness, Of the Morning Glory's death.
Author notes
I heard a line from a show I was listening to, and then the poetic feel just kinda...hit me.
Written March 9th, 2006
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glad you liked my poem. I might make it longer if I have more inspiration.
speaking of long time no talk, I did'nt know you were still on AP o.o;; I had gone to your page a few times and it said your page was gone, so I just gave up.
I hope you're doing ok. All's fine here. ^ _ ^
~J-Chan Z0MBIESARESQUEESHINGJ00RH34D!!!XD -
It has a great flow to it and it pulls you in and kinda leaves you hanging it is good but I really wish it was longer! continue with your brilliance! *smile* Long time no talk or critique... Keep writing hopefully I will be around more often!
~*Kit*~ -
The third, fourth, and fifth lines were amazing, man. And the poem really hit me with desire. I love it. The show you watched may have changed your life, HooWa! Anyways you write really well.
Live on and live again.
-Kenny -
thanks, glad ya liked it ^_^
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great poem
this is sheer brilliance i love it.
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