tangible you are not,
neither are my feelings.
but both are so real,
crushing and dominating
taking over from with in
and spilling onto the outside.
i cant stop you.
i cant stop them.
i cant stop me from wanting more.
make it stop.
please!
it hurts,
hurts for me to know of something
great,
wonderful,
horrible,
true in everyday,
with out ever having a chance to capture it.
bend either to my will.
to make things just right.
to be at peace,
with in myself .
God,
stop it.
make it just stop,
because its crashing.
I'm crying.
he's disappearing.
Where will I go from here?
The world is spinning,
so fast.
i cant see,
its blurry,
confusing.
absolutely out of control.
Spinning.
around and around.
Ahhhhh!
I'm going to be sick.
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Written March 9th, 2006
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Lol thank you for the comment and although i didnt write this with humor i can see humor in the last line and yeah i didnt get a chance to edit this because i was leaving shortly after posting this...=] thank you
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very good
i enjoyed this it was very good and intense,very enjoyable .a little wrong spelling (absolutely) but great work. for some reason though the "i'm going to be sick " at the end made me laugh.keep writing .
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