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Mommy, Mommy!

 

 


 

Mommy, Mommy,
Injustice! Injustice!
Make it right! Make it right!
Waaaaa! Waaaaa!


 

Deep we delve into the human psyche
displayed by our littlest ones…
for is it not injustice that made us cry
from Day One…?


 

Mommy, Mommy!
Be ready for stern trials and judgments,
oh wise King Solomon of the modern world!


 

Trust your initial instincts,
whether it’s a quick slap
to prevent impending disaster
or congratulatory praise of support-
that which is done without thinking
is usually not questioned.


 

It is when a parent becomes trivial
in their demands do children rebel!
They quickly learn what really matters…
they will always listen to what really matters…
it’s the little trivial things
that will become points of contention…


 

so be ready to back up everything
with wisdom… oh mother-to-be,
start collecting it now…
for the tough questions are inevitable…
“Why did you have us, Mommy?”


 

Don’t be afraid of a smiling shrug and an “I don’t know!”
(It was applicable many times for me!)
Let them grow up and figure it all out
for all of mankind, and become great figures of history!

We are nature,
and cannot explain all things yet…

Then there is human society...

 

yawn, OK, it’s 3:16am…
have I said anything of value here?
zzzzzzzzzzzz…! lol


 

 

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just think, you could be having triplets, oh Poetry Niece!
Written March 9th, 2006

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  • CodeNameCassie
    March 9, 2006
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    aggggghhh triplets! Don't say that...don't jinx me!!!!! Darling Uncle...this was a great poem and thank you for entering and showing support for me...I appreciate it more than you know. Love you soooo much

    Your favoritest AP niece,

    ~Sara


    I miss surfing


  • poetryality silver member
    March 9, 2006
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    No "slaps" but "taps"... I love the wisdom here Oh Poetry Honorable Son. Cassie will need to hold on to this for when the TWINS become toddlers. I have a 14 month old grandson, a 4 year old grandson and one that's six, and you are so right about;

    "so be ready to back up everything
    with wisdom…"


    This is so like an uncle would advise his niece. Thanks you for the entry and the best of luck to you dear heart.

    Much Love,
    Renee (Mom)


  • wbiro gold member
    March 9, 2006
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    Hello, my Mommy Poetry daughter! Glad you and Kara are doing OK... I hope she's just as smart as you are! One hour a day usually does it... Funny, this is the picture I used for the contest to become your poetry Dad!
    Edited on Mar 09, 2:30 because ''.

  • Malzy
    March 9, 2006
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    Oh how long its been since Ive commented on anything, Im glad this is the one I come back to.. I know now after Kara turning one I feel so lucky that I didnt have twins, ahhhhh lol.. this was awesomely written.. so I hope Cassie enjoys this as much as I did.

    Malzy