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the man i chose.

I need you so much
like the breath i intake
one graze of your touch
is all it will take

i need to hear you breathe
because you cant be close
lying next to me
the destiny i chose

im so in love with you
it breaks my heart to leave
i dont think your untrue
when it comes to me

the future is shaky
but this i know
if my heart is breaking
youll never know

you fight back my tears
and youll hold me close
taking away my fears
with the man i chose.



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this kinda sucks sorry
Written March 8th, 2006

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  • kitkat08
    May 23, 2007

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    wow

    i love this poem i dont think it sucks a man that soemone loves can really do that to a person and make them feel safe no mater what i wish i hada guy like that... kathy


  • KissMeLikeULoveME
    March 9, 2006
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    greatness

    nah i like it