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Afraid

You think you see it all
You think you hear it all
But you never know what might happen next

Nobody can prevent what happen next
Nobody can know the future
Little girl's body just scattered there like nothing

He is the man who killed her
He is the man who is responsible for her
Why am i so fill up with anger

Maybe because i just don't understand why would someone do such a thing
How can life be so cruel?
So cruel to this little girl
Who did nothing wrong except being afraid

If afraid is the right word to use
Who in this world has never been afraid?
If you never been afraid then you only lie to yourself

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Written March 8th, 2006

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  • dreamer wind
    March 15, 2006
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    thank you i shall remove it now how


  • grannyeri gold member
    March 15, 2006
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    Your sentiments well expressed in this verse- the anger, the puzzlement and the concern about why someone would do this dispicable act. First line in 4th verse- an extra word there needs to be removed, I think - could.

  • dreamer wind
    March 9, 2006
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    thank you. I correct the thing you want me to correct now. Thank you


  • DreameeDarlin2U
    March 9, 2006
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    I must agree with honey bear. Your writings are very deep and emotional. I always enjoy reading them.


  • honey bear
    March 9, 2006
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    very good

    exelent work my friend , i love your work you have so much inside thaat needs to be said. keep up the writing. looking forward to reading more.

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