I hate to see you down
And i hate to see you cry
But baby this isnt about you
Not this time
My tears still come
As a matter of fact
And will i ever know
Were you ever worth it
I won't be good for you
I'll work on you like a bad habit
You'll try to break me
But im your disease
The thoughts so random
I can't seem to place them
Dont turn back now
I cant seem to understand
Hazy days and foggy nights
Frost on my windows
And raindrops in my eyes
So dont leave me here again
You've hurt me a million times
The pain is numbing
And I'd rather be dead
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Written March 8th, 2006
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amazing:)
i felt the pain that you had as you wrote this. amazing
i love how you just poor everything out
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i like it! it makes me think.... and feel the pain i went through with my ex. it still hurts..... :'(
i loved this chibba!
love ya~
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Hail to you Chibberness! Wow... I don't quiet understand it. To complex for my simple mind to grasp. The imagery changed with every line it was very interesting. Not so sure it had a story though. It flowed well and it was unique! Good job. Have a great day!
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( Gives Chibbs a hug. ) It seems as if you're still hurting about stuff angel... well that sucks. And you know I'm here for ya Chibbs. ( Smiles and slides into the Orange Sherbert Pool... wondering why he hasn't heard from her in a while. )
~Pedro~
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That is the most random picture I've ever seen. Rather amusing as well, which doesn't seem to go with the body of the poem. It's a good write though.
Sara
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