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( Nothing el.se matters When your around )
"shut up....
We can __-Stop-__ the WORLD,
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I'll ||Melt|| with
<3You<3
Into to nothing, & everyTHING. at on.ce."
We can be the ones They (all) want to .b.e.
Whith \\ch.ao.s// In the *S*t*a*r*s*
&& Sweat on the [Sheets].
.With |Razor| Written Verses
on our F L E S H
I'll be a g00d gh0st.
You can we.ar my heart on your [[Jack & Sally]] Jacket
right on the -front- by y.o.u.R.s
I'll ne one |||Lucky|||
girl...
=N= <3love<3
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Written March 8th, 2006
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Kitty it is alil confusing 2 follow,but its a cool poem...
ILL use of words thats why its hott...Love ya
Chris. -
no he does not. i love his jacket. its nice and it looks good on barry.
lol
meanie. jk -
lol yeah that sounds kool he wears that jacket too much
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yeah i do writ it like that on paper because i am just a difficult person, and i see how it is hard to read but there is meaning to it. the point was chaos=love.
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this is a really good poem. hmmm... it's got a bit of "emo" touch to it.
Jack and Sally. hah!
I must agree though, this is hard to read. a lot of people I know do the same. but when you write it do you write is like that or do you just type it like that? I do that every now and then but that really is difficult to read. I am so focused on where you put the funny stuff that it's hard for me to focus on the actual poem.
but all in all this was a good poem! -
? im confused y do u type it lik that it makes no senceits only confusing
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