A screen door on a submarine,
Useful like gleeful joy
Only when it comes flooding in;
The drowning of a toy.
Emphasize with black highlighter;
Useful as fevered hate:
The sly darkness seeming to crowd
As a slithering snake.
Puncture an inflated dartboard
Used like heated passion.
Inflated with only warmth;
Bursting, without ration.
Life is a big chocolate teapot
Used to complain about,
But when nothing on the inside,
It never melts to spout.
Author notes
ya.... another failed attempt at meter and rhym... i suck at this! lol
Written March 8th, 2006
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this reminds me of my childhood kinda. hehe yeah and it is kinda weird but... hmmm idk cheah well w/e works eh? alrighty then!
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This was interesting in a weird sort of way. Black highlighters...I wish I had one of those. I would highlight everything with it. Who cares if I can't see what's underneath? I don't need to. Ok...never mind. Anyway...yeah. What sort of meter were you trying to use here anyway? This was weird...

