My heart is breaking from what I have done.
At first I was out to have some fun.
That fun soon turned to regret.
I have done something that I can't expect you to forget.
I wish that something could explain how I feel.
But nothing right now to me seems real.
I'm sorry that I can not tell you why.
I don't think it would matter so I'm not gonna try.
It's ok if you want to go.
I would do the same I know.
Just remember I love you still.
That, I am sure, I always will.
Author notes
I worte this shortly after i cheated on my boyfriend of 5 months. I do not condon cheating and the whole situation is very ard for all people involved, but sometimes people are going through things that leads them to act out. In my case i was so deadly afraid to give my heart to anyone after all the pain i went through. When i met my boyfriend, he was so perfect and so great that i kind of sabatosed the relationship because i couldnt believe that this was really true, and i didnt think that i deserved him. Two and a half years later we are still together and we are stronger then ever. Sometimes there are underlying reasons for cheating, sometimes there are not. You have to look inside yourself to make the distinction.
Written March 8th, 2006
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- Cheating by tropicalgurl.
300 points, ended March 13, 2006, 25 entries
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Excellent Write
Wow excellent write here. The flow and ryhthm and ryhme is flawless to me. Its sad, but I think for most people we have felt this way for no one is perfect. The title Breaking is so perfect for your poem. Thank you for sharing your gift to write poetry with me.
Blessings
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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Great work..Everyone has their own reasons for what they do. Although it may seem right to some ift may be wrong for someone else. You have penned much emotions and feelings here. Great work.
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We all do things in life that we regret and can never take back...You penned something so raw in emotion and so true in reality.You penned it to flow so wonderfully and kept yourself true to the emotions embedded within the write...An excellent read...
Blessings
~~Cheryl~~
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its beautiful and has great rhyme!!!
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This was nicely written if flowed really nicely.You did a nice job on it.Nice Job!
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