the little red devils dance on my tounge.
floating, far away in a blue light, everywhere consumed within
the music, I'm everthing! I'm everywhere, I'm everyone.
Running far far away from the bad things, but It's hard because
I'm Gumby. I can't walk It's funny I don't care if the evolved cat gets
me. I'm so happy I feel like the world. I AM GOD.
Swirling, dancing, flying in a blue light txting into outerspace.
I don't know what's real or not....I think I'm asleep.....No I'm
flying. I love you but I don't love the sex chat line.
I can feel marylin mansons voice pouring into me with crazyiness
and love, I can feel the music, It's inside me, I think I am it.
I feel It through my body dancing to my heart even though my heart
is beating so fast It doesn't make sense to me.
a cigarette......It's my love I can feel the magical smoke make
the evolved cat go away. You are a flower blooming in front of me
I can see your petals open. You're beautiful.
My legs don't work I think they're broke, I can't walk, broken legs
never been so funny. The Crow? We're gonna watch the Crow? Ok but let
me fix my legs first. The journey took so long....I dunno how many years It took but we made It.
Brandon Lee why are you saying the same thing over and over again?
I can't understand what you're saying. What time is it? 4:30?
5 years passed.....Brandon Lee why do you say and do the same things?
It's 4:30. Why won't the time change why does the same thing happen.
WHY WON'T YOU SHUT UP!?!
Author notes
Written March 8th, 2006
A contest entry
- Go Ask Alice by Lithium n lollipops.
300 points, ended March 12, 2006, 2 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this was an amazing write very well worded and easy to follow i will read over this again wen i am not at work.
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Oh the Evolved cat. Lol. Yea It's kinda funny, but the cat got bigger and scary and he looked evil. So yea.
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I'm guessing you wrote it while tripping, and if not, you're genius at describing it. That was very interesting to read, I really enjoyed it. especially "why won't the time change why does the same thing happen"
Nice, really enjoyed it. -
good + unique
Well! This was crazy, all right. That's how our minds are, though; that's life. There have been times I could just look up at the blue of the sky and be flooded with seemingly unrelated thoughts, and just the way it feels is actually scary at times. Anyway, this was fun to read. It calls to be read some more, like trying to unlock the mystery of the "evolved cat" and such. That ending kind of has a William Faulkner feel (which I like in this case). -
yea It was pretty messed up.
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"I can feel marylin mansons voice pouring into me with crazyiness
and love, I can feel the music, It's inside me, I think I am it.
I feel It through my body dancing to my heart even though my heart
is beating so fast It doesn't make sense to me."
That is amazing.
I can relate to that-
while tripping once
I felt the same way with
a rob zombie song.
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lol, cute, in a stoner kind of way, I like it though, nice imagery!
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