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blood.

Keep it dripping
Keep it slipping
Pull the Trigger continue gripping.

Once, twice. make it nice, this amount of blood will suffice.
Guilt and shame, it's all the same.

Oozing red, clicking...dead.

White sheets stained, someone blamed.
Somewhat hated, love retained.
Let it go and end this game.

Just keep dreaming, this is life.
Keep the screaming.

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Written March 8th, 2006

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  • FalbatrossF
    March 8, 2006
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    Short, but sweet. Well not really sweet.. more like sour I guess. But sour is good. Anyway, it has a good rythm, so to me it sounds like it would be a good song.
    Great work!