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With Your Guidance

I feel a delicate breeze upon my skin,
it gently pushes its way through sheer panels,
resembling outstretched Angel wings

Giving me shelter, and replenishing my hope
Whispering to me, untangling the rope,
that have entwined all my sins,
causing this darkness I'm in,
And in my nocturnal world,
I now feel light within

I feel no weight of the world
that has been left behind,
I no longer acknowledge the thoughts,
that creep into my mind,
I no longer feel anger,
towards ones who have done me wrong,
I have no need for resentment,
for ones that wished me harm

I am moving on,to a much better place,
and with your guidance,I know I will always be safe,
It is no longer a demon, everyday that I face,
I see sunlight ahead,and the past leaves no trace...

Author notes

) The Lord says: "Forget what happened before and do not think about the past. Look at the new thing I am going to do. It is already happening. Don't you see it? I will make a road in the desert and rivers in dry land." Isaiah 43: 18-19

Written March 8th, 2006

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  • Angelindiskyz
    March 9, 2006
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    Thank you - I am going through this same thing right at the moment, so it was a bit of self reflection and a bit introspective peice and very easy to write. Now if only I could just take my own advise. Great topic - thanks for choosing this - perfect timeing for me!!

    I will have to stop by your page and read some of your new postings, I haven't had a chance to catch up on my faves...


  • BonnieQ silver member
    March 8, 2006
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    Beautiful

    You have beautifully reflected Isaiah's words; for, indeed, when we cease to live in the past, preferring instead God's Light, we suddenly carry no burdens: fully released of all pain and rage, filled only with forgiveness and love for those who harmed us. Best wishes in the contest!

    Love and hugs, B♥nnieQ


  • Frogzter gold member
    March 8, 2006
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    You have done justice to the Scripture and option that you chose! Well done and thanks so much for entering! It was a blessing and a treasure to read! My best to you~
    Frog