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It used to be me

It used to be me,
who you told your deepest secrets to.
It used to be me,
who know everything about your life.
It used to be me,
who you made sure you got a seat next to.
It used to be me,
who you wanted to go out with at the weekends.
It used to be me,
who you sat in class with, and got told off for planning our evening out.
It used to be me,
that had you hanging off my arm.
It used to be me,
that had the honour of being called your best friend.
It used to be me,
that was round your house at every opportunity.
It used to be me,
that knew your whole family backwards.
It used to be me,
you copied your homework from when you where too tired to do it.
It used to be me,
that shared your notes in class.
It used to be me,
that clogged up your inbox with texts and emails.
It used to be me,
that used to make your Mum mad, as we were never off the phone.
It used to be me.
And now I have to watch someone else taking my place, at your side.
It used to be me.

Author notes

I wrote this in an English class in 5 minutes, so it needs some editing, but tell me what you think so far! = )
Written March 8th, 2006

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  • FlirtingWithSuicide
    March 17, 2006
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    I like this poem it goes well with me because I had a best friend and we knew each other for 4 years and now she moved but also I don't know what happenned because were not much of best friends anymore because she flirts with my man and he likes her too I guess so Idk but oh well nice work and keep it up!


  • idontno
    March 10, 2006
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    and robyn soz forgot her lol

  • idontno
    March 10, 2006
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    hey sweetie it me and robyn this is really good but who is it about hope your ok love see you in the drama hall after school
    love
    sara

  • torn-roses
    March 9, 2006
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    hey hunni whos this bout...? u no im always here 4 u don't u...? well i am

    loves ya


  • debsdelight
    March 8, 2006
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    Awe how sad but beautiful. Loved the read. Well done. debs

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