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mon chere

rhythmic vibrations
sweet melodies
harshness and anger
resonate from me
draw your bow across your ever waiting metal binds
slurs and staccatos
forte and metsopiano
wrapping around me
like a blinding energy
all that is left
is my instrument
your melodies
I need only my dearest of loves with me
for you are and you'll always be me greatest dreams
and harmonies
like I could fly
or fall
or become something wholly anxious
proud
and curious
Tell me your stories
show me your scars
tell me your past partners
sing your loudest to me
like some Hollywood movie
we'll reap drama like an oath
Can you tell what we'll be seeing
can you tell what we'll be feeling
as I let you go
destiny has brought us together more than once upon a time
and I fear I can't hold longer to your internal glow
move away and leave me here
for I don't deserve
and I cant help feel saddened when I hear you play
looks like we're not just going
our separate ways
because I know without you
I'll never be the same
so whisper to me gently and bathe within my tears
Oh god I've always loved you throughout all these years
and no matter what I do
no matter what I say
Well be wearing tears as
we each forge our way
in two separate paths
never meant to be lovers roads today
So will we part tomorrow or
maybe just today
anyway I know that my hands will always shape
to the bandings of your body
and the pain you let escape
As lovers we wait
never to win
as lovers we feel
sadness again
but remember
destiny has eyes for
flowers out of sorrow

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Written March 8th, 2006

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  • CapturedMoon
    March 11, 2006
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    This poem means more to me than I try to let on. I only wish I could 'understand' what it is you're talking about. Well nevertheless, it is an amazing poem and is completely relateable. Despite your comment on your page, you DO make the reader feel as if it was written just for them. Its wonderful as always.


  • Georgia La Mariposa
    March 8, 2006
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    I really liked this piece of writing, it showed skill and passion and I would like to see more of your work in the future. I am honoured to have read your work. Keep it up!