Oh, vacuous silence that shatters this night,
but a bawdy thief of assonance strife.
Stealthily imprisoning my soul in defeat,
in perpetual darkness thy fiendishness seeks.
To throttle a jubilence of evening's delight,
suffocating jovial melodic radiant might.
Thy prowling cannonade glacial silent clamor,
hath vanquished my salvoed heart's sweetest banter.
Annihilating all rapturous, sweet ambrosia rhapsody,
in abysses of your embittered, lethargic decree.
Thy brutish admonishment of celestial serenade,
hath murdered the angelic heaven's accolades.
Oh, tragic thy dispassionate aloof annihilation
of heavenly improvisational sweet celebration.
~~~Suseann~~~
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I followed the rules.
Written March 7th, 2006
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This was one of the most astonishing poems yet. I truely loved the articulation in this poem. You have done well and I must say that you are in the countdown. Please bear with me as I fumble through the rest of the entries so that I may make my decision. Thank you so much for your wonderful entry.
~val~
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Brilliance True Gold in Heart & Soul!
Dearest suseann~
You lace each word with tender embroidery
You did follow the rules because I had to look up the meaning within
Your seamless flawless rhythm rhyme
The third stanzas is mega force powerful
Eloquent and beautifully penned in the style of Shakespeare
I can hear the blue jays singing in your “heavenly, symphonic rhapsodies”
Par Excellence my new old friend lovely to bask in your heaven!
Best of luck in the contest, your title enchants in Utter Brilliance~
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You did well with word play my friend
will have your name made tonight. Me~
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Hi, you know you can read this poem in two distinct ways, the one way nearlly made me fall of my seat laughing, the other way was a trip to the past, clever lass,you pulled something off that I culd never do, drat thee o lack of applause wilt thee abondon me so cruely, my of vicious lack of points you spurn me so, great my friend all the best in the comp, hugs Di
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wow, there are many strong images in this piece. good job
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