Too many beers,
In too little time!
The things I then say,
Should be considered a crime!
Some people say, "A drunken mind,
Speaks a sober heart"
Those people obviously don't drink,
And for the truth they should start!
Sure a drunk person,
Can speak the truth!
But mostly they don't,
When they're in their youth!
Things I have said,
Almost killed friendships!
The thought of that happening,
Feels like a thousands whips!
Too many beers,
In too little time!
The things I then say,
Should be considered a crime!
By: Mike W.
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Written March 7th, 2006
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I like this poem alot. So true! I really know that! This is a very unique poetic concept. It flows so well. Very easy to read! Has a slightly lighter side to it while keeping it's meaning. Well done, great write.
And thank you for commenting on my poem. How long have you been in the military?
~Katie -
hey this is an awesome write and you really do speak the truth.. but youdont know how much shit this puts on me mike.. you have no fucking clue... you hurt me so bad.. i thought you really cared... i thought you really did and shit and you did this mike.... WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY??????????????????????????????????????????
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kind of has humor in it but at the same time sincerity, very good poem, keep it up
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