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Conch

Mother's allergic to everything
Especially semen
That's why I'm "all fucked up"
Watched a bluebird drop
And more than one cuckoo.

Mom said "read!"

And I did
As if running from tsunami.

Once, I went for fit pink shell
Center of the tide pool
Took a jelly sting on the shin
Mom grabbed me by the ear
Threw me down,
Pissed on my leg
with a triumphant howl.

No amount of flowers
can cover that
Now, bigger pool,
Larger shells
Putting my ear to
a vacancy
I find a reason
To turn around.



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Written March 7th, 2006

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  • layla.
    March 12, 2006
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    *trying not sulk so hard*


  • horus8 gold member
    March 11, 2006
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    I doubt you have to try.


  • layla.
    March 11, 2006
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    huh? waaaaaaaaaaaa? "wait a minute, what are we talking about?" says Chicken Little.
    hmm funny*confused look*, *trying not to sound serious*... but where is the connection between this and the spiral or the balance... er o i get it now, it's linked with "limits of emotion"....HA HA!
    phew...*eye rolling* i was not trying to act stupid
    hey thanx for the laugh.
    good luck.
    tc.
    Edited on Mar 11, 3:47 because ''.


  • Heart Sutra
    March 9, 2006
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    Yes, you like Mary Cat, what am I going to do with your off the couch, off the cuff serious non serious self? Is this one of those "I hate my mother" poems? LOL. Or is it more like "mamma screwed me up with her man hate" poems? Just kidding. In case the patrol is coming around, it is okay folks, horus8 can handle a joke, in fact, he prefers them. Seriously, thanks for entering this wildly unpink poem into the contest.


  • shastadaisey123
    March 7, 2006
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    OMG whatever shall we do with you??? deleriously funny sir

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