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Open, Shut

Lines are down
No one is here
Truly alone
And terrified
Backs have turned
Hearts once open
Are now closed
No longer wanted
Never wanted
In the first place
It seems...

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Written March 7th, 2006

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  • starlock
    April 8, 2006
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    wow, this is nicly written, i like the how inpersonal it seems to be, like its generaliing, but in a goood way. well done. keep up the brillant work!
    starlockxx