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All Alone.

light a fire
toss me in
watch it burn
right through my skin

all alone
a broken heart
for everyday
we stand apart

grab a knife
stab my soul
for now my mind
has lost control

dig my grave
& dig it deep
so finally now
i can sleep

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Written March 6th, 2006

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  • J Rhys Davies
    March 6, 2006
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    This could easily be placed into the dark category as well. You did a great job with the flow and the rhyming within your lines. It’s always great to come across new members that do this so well.

    Keep penning and welcome to AP!

    ~ John