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The Bet

There was these two guys
One who actually liked me and one full of lies

Of course I made the wrong mistake
On which one I was going to date

I chose the one who was full of lies
And all he did was gave me a handful of cries

I gave "into" him so we could hopefully be together
He told me that the love he had for me would last forever

At school the next day all eyes were on me
and everyone was talking, staring and looking crazy

Some shook their heads in shame
but overall I was the one to blame

I walked over to the boy that actually liked me
But he only shook his head in disbelief

He walked pass me and said I thought so much of you
but I guess you didn't want someone who was real and true

I walked over slowly to the other
And he gratefully shamed me out and blew our cover

He said WHAT ARE YOU STUPID
I was to dumb to see this love wasn't made by cupid

He looked at me and laughed with no serenity
I felt even worst cause he was the one who took my virginity

He told me I was only a girl used for a bet
I ran away crying and added this into my heart of shame and regret

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Written March 6th, 2006

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  • OneAndOnlyRay
    March 12, 2006
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    Ummm???


  • DarkFire-J
    March 12, 2006
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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO


  • ---FrumanEsque---
    March 6, 2006
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    Amazing!

    OMG that's even worse. I am soooo soooo soooo very very very sorry. Thats an amzaing poem. I am sorry about him. Guys are jerks and I hope everything worked out in the end. Good luck!

  • OneAndOnlyRay
    March 6, 2006
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    Thank you but I wasn't done. Could you read it now?

  • ---FrumanEsque---
    March 6, 2006
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    AMAZING!!!

    OMFG that stinks. I feel so bad for you!!! So sad!!! Guys totally suck sometimes... I thought you were going to say something like he told everyone you guys had sex. That happened to me once, and it's as bad as it gets. Good luck!


  • XKilled InnocenceX
    March 6, 2006
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    wow. this is so sad. it shows that guys can be real jerks and can really hurt.keep it up.
    xo's
    Morgan

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