I can see its reflection
sparkling from nature's rays.
beautiful ;your own art .
Sparkling ; shimmering ....blue.
I can see what's above me, doubled into its self , I can see the flight of the skys raven ...From looking into your face.
The wind blow's , you become distorted ; Only to become perfect in your cycle again .
Your a design for itself
Your a sentence unspoken,
A book full of chapters .
Your sound is the beauty of
Heavenly laughter.
I can taste the Earth,
I can hear it in my Heart.
Every place has its own design; Unless it gets ripped apart ....
~ REspecT OuR Earth~
Author notes
Written March 6th, 2006
A contest entry
- Let your words shine by meena krish.
300 points, ended March 30, 2006, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I find this a lovely dedication to Mother Earth..beautiful and warm. I especially liked this stanza:
Your a design for itself
Your a sentence unspoken,
A book full of chapters .
Your sound is the beauty of
Heavenly laughter.
Interesting images you have created..well done.
Thank you for your entry..and good luck.
Take care~
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hey heather, I forget how good this one was, I know I read it before you posted here, but its actually remarkably written. We should put a book together, Me "mom" aka sandy123 on AP, your sister and you of course, your grandmother wants us too, Well see you on msn, I love you , your sooooooo pretty, where do you get your good looks from I wonder and talent, I think it runs in the family......don't you think.
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beautiful
wow, that's awesome. the imagery is fantastic. very imaginative.
"Every place has its own design; Unless it gets ripped apart"
powerful, very powerful.
you are a great writer, and you could do the whole world justice, by continuing to write.
rich
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