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Grandmother

She left the heaven of heroes and came down To make me a girl to meet the mortal need of her grand daughter. A women who reach out from the mountains and to the sea. The friendly voice welcome me to open up to her and share my downs. Which stops me from moving on so I know she is my guardian angle but even more my grandmother.

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Written March 6th, 2006

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  • xBrokenxSmilesx
    March 12, 2006
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    aww this is beautiful! Your grandmother! Aww i love the meaning of the poem! This is great, keep it up!

    Love ya
    Stephani