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Who are the animals here?



Who are the animals here?
  The bear, Wolf, Human or deer?

What is "civilized",
A rain forest full of lush green trees;
or polluted clouds in the so called cities?

A mothers love cant be beat
Human and wolf alike;
both protect from cold and heat.
what we wouldn't do for our little tike.

Population is the issue,
Human kind has that problem too.
Do we kill off Humans, cause we are too many!
So - right to life is selfishly human you see?

Who has more rights to be on this earth,
what species has given this world what shes really worth,
The care she actually deserves.

God intended his creatures to live how,
Do you think he's happy with us now?

Who are the animals here?
The Bear, Wolf, human or Deer?

Alaska take notice! There are other ways,
you can ship them anywhere these days.
I've raised some before, i can do it again;
send them to me: I'll be their friend!






Author notes

Im sure there are plenty of zoos (example)that have room for them,
killing them is not the only answer. Thats just Wrong,
lazy and cheap! God entrusted us with this
earth as a gift, one we have to be responsible for.
~Arial Killings of Wolves (or any animal)~ They have No recourse for self defense & It's Just cruel,I undertstand that Alaska* may be over run at the moment~ But that is NOT the answer.
Written March 6th, 2006
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  • This is an awesome poem. They should not kill the wolves. That is very wrong. I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest


  • Shantti
    April 22

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    I enjoyed this very much. It's very powerful.

    Who are the animals here?
    The Bear, Wolf, human or Deer?

    Sweet. Best of luck in the contest

    I'm glad I got the chance to read

  • different form what i perfer to read but at least i didnt slouch i like the whole motherly love animal feel so on thanks for letting me come over


  • Hectic Michelle
    May 31, 2008
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    I like this. Its a cute poem and you have a good case!


  • bananasfoster42
    May 19, 2008

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    wolves are such beautiful creatures. it saddens me to see them being destroyed. thanks for the entry!!


  • imperfectperfection
    May 19, 2008

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    Thought Provoking

    God when painted hills, river and land
    Adam and Eve came to stay
    But loneliness was their friend
    So Lord send few others
    Animals and creatures of all kind
    To stay by their side
    To be living freely
    as God had intended

    But little the creator knew
    the demons were lurking around
    His best worst creation
    Us, the humans
    who live by and for themselves
    Were soon to walk all over lives of others

    Over population is our biggest problem
    So we set our eyes on animal kingdom
    Erode away rain forests
    Making barren lands cry their tears
    Cost of our living
    we make poor animals pay
    So we can thrive on their blood money

    Killing for pleasure
    or Not enough humanity left
    What ever the reason may be
    We know how to kill animals
    and find our best excuses.


  • eclairluv
    May 10, 2008
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    This has great issues to discuss! Your poem brings the serious matter to light. A nature lover myself, I like it very much! Good job.


  • Rinoasis
    April 29, 2008

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    Wow, amazing poem that I truly agree with. I like the ending of the poem, it's so sympathic. This poem shows much compassion and empathy. Well done.

    Blessed Be,

    ~Evolet


  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    April 26, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry

    Wolves roamed those lands long before humans touched it. That is the problem with people, particularly the white man. They will destroy, kill, or move anything that keeps them from having more space. We need to learn to cohabitate with the animals. They deserve to be just as much if not more than we do.

    Wa-do(Thanks)& God Bless
    Tammy


  • MMGerard323
    April 25, 2008
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    i love it! its amazing! good luck in the contest!!


  • dreamdragon6484
    March 18, 2007

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    awesome

    wonderful writ sis, very good points. we've raised the wolves,and much more. we can and would do it again. good luck in the contest.


  • Kahliya
    March 15, 2007

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    I applaud you!
    Well done and the idea and conviction behind this poem is a fantastic one!
    Well put


  • WelshDragon
    May 24, 2006
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    BRAVO...... Very well put........


  • Pookiebubu
    March 9, 2006
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    Well, I don't know that I would recommend a zoo. That's definitely not any natural environment I think any animal should have, but I do agree that there are other alternatives. Humans are selfish creatures, putting themselves higher than any other living thing on this planet. When will we wake up and realize that we share this planet, not own it?
    Thank you for sharing, and good luck!


  • Lancea Optimus
    March 6, 2006
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    I completely agree with this poem. You stated good points. Humans are now lazy and cheap. We now think that we can control nature when nature controls us.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    March 6, 2006
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    you hit it a heck of a good shot.. many states wold be willing to have them ..I am sure.. Pa I know has very few wolves..if any..I have not seen or heard..but good suggestions keep writing good luck..Linda

  • dreamdragon6484
    March 6, 2006
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    Awesome

    Awsome write sis. your point comes across very clear.keep the ink flowing and good luck.
    Hope they get this stoped!!!!!!!!!!!

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