Everyday it seems to me,
I hear another lie
And it leaves me to wonder,
Why I don’t say goodbye
We have tried to make it work,
So many times before
What makes me believe it is different,
And you won’t be out the door
You say that you love me,
And it is stronger then ever
That the day you again leave,
Will be the end of never
But sometimes my heart and mind,
Just do not seem to agree
I find my self bracing,
For the day you again leave
Asking my self why,
I put my heart on my sleeve
I wonder what is wrong with me,
In the dead of night
Why for just a simple touch,
We have to have a fight
You never show you love me,
Or give me reasons to stay
It seems that more and more,
I want to walk away
I don’t want to live,
Without the affection I crave
But our love is something,
I desperately want to save
I need more then words,
To know how you really feel
I don’t want every touch from you,
To be ones I have to steal
I need intimacy and passion,
For you to take my breath away
Just like you used to do,
Way back in the day
I long to feel your hand,
Gently caress my face
Or just a kiss so full of passion,
It will make my heart race
Are all of those little things,
So very hard for you to give
Do you know it is those little things,
Are what make it worth it to live
Before we loose our love again,
By getting in a rush
Let’s try to do what it takes,
To save what is left of us
I don’t want the day to come,
When you once again leave
I don’t want to regret,
Putting my heart on my sleeve
I don’t want to lay awake anymore,
Wondering deep into the night
And I don’t want your attention,
To be because we had a fight
I want to feel all of your love,
And know just why it is I stay
And know that neither of us,
Is going to again walk away
But baby this is what I need,
For us to forever be
And if I can’t have it,
I will leave eventually
I need intimacy and passion,
For you to take my breath away,
Just like you used to do,
Way back in the day..
Author notes
Love IS the key to happiness
Written March 6th, 2006
A contest entry
- I want something that is dark about love by BloodTearsDrop.
300 points, ended March 8, 2006, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I like this because it is long. No one has to put a piece of poetry together to please people with ADD. If something is worth reading it should be able to express itself until the theme, storyline or image is complete. Nice. RC
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Thank you alot of my poems are kinda long winded lol Nik
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Good write..but a little long I got the point tho.
Good Luck,
*Wishy* -
sounds like love is struggling here, in my eyes if it is struggling to be then it is not meant to be, too much worry involved and looking too regret, it dampens the sparkle of love. a good piece.



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