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True Love



I love you
without knowing
why,
or from where,
and I don’t
question this.
I accept it
for what
it truly is…
you are,
my soul’s
counter point.
The reasons
why I love you
or where
it came from
are irrelevant.
I LOVE YOU…
regardless of
your faults or
your past…
I see my future
in your eyes.

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Written March 6th, 2006

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  • Phed
    April 7, 2006
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    Love this poem! It is really beautiful! I also like the ending.

    regardless of
    your faults or
    your past…
    I see my future
    in your eyes.

    That is very emotional! I like how you express unconditional love.
    Thanks for entering! Good luck!

  • animepoetess
    March 31, 2006
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    And what kind of person does it say I am?


  • Billy Kage
    March 31, 2006
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    Grear

    This one says alot about the person you are.
    (I love you..Regardless of your faults) That part stands out to me alot. Great work.

    Billy.


  • forget my memories
    March 27, 2006
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    aww this is short and sweet it reaminds me of my boyfriend amazing job! <3 sam


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 20, 2006
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    it is funny, i have heard all this long before, it has been said to many, by many others, but never this clear,never like this. i guess each person means it the same but speaks it differently this is a great poem, keep it flowing


  • Sonrio
    March 19, 2006
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    aww. this is sweet. To be honest, it is a bit cliche though, i mean, all this has been said before. Next time, you might try to add new insight to the thought of love, like a metaphor on how it makes you feel inside or something. Is it like a waterfall, did it cascade through your body until it could be found everywhere, coursing in your veins? you could be so descriptive...

  • Brokenpen
    March 19, 2006
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    awesome write

    this is beautiful. this describes love in its whole. the way it should be. thank you for sharing your words with me. keep on writing.


  • JamaicanEmpress
    March 8, 2006
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    simply amazing and true..relates to me

  • PoOl Of EtErNiTy
    March 6, 2006
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    short sweet and I relate to it very much, when your in love your willing to look past, past faults this is a beautiful poem and it touches base on many lovely points, thankx for sharing.


  • buffsab99
    March 6, 2006
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    excellent

    you just know how to express yourself so beautifully

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