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Military Man

Your were friends with a guy who became a military man.
your happy when he was here but you become sad because he left and didn't say goodbye.
you wonder if things will be the same when he returns.
You think your in love with a military man.
How can you set him free.
Dedicated to Andrew Hayes

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Written August 14th, 2005

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  • Availea
    March 16, 2006
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    Definetly, I hope you're happy in everything you do, cause you deserv it girlie. 39 days till we Graduate! YAY!
    Anyways, talk to ya laterz.
    Love yas,
    Sarah


  • PassionOfAnAngel
    March 15, 2006
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    i agree with squirreldude but not all do...*sigh*


  • SecertPoet
    March 6, 2006
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    People that leave and come back from the millitary do seem different but they snap out of that phase normally.